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Sorry, I am Chinese and I cannot speak English, so there may be grammar errors. I do not quite understand the pilot season. Do I need to purchase the official version of the game again after purchasing the pilot season

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不用的铁子!开篇季就是为了开篇,开篇季还有百分之50的内容需要更新进来。后续会有第一季由另外一位美女操刀剧本,我就负责动画和场景。第一季会单独售卖。没有什么官方版本哈哈。开篇季就是开篇季,其他季是其他季,你可以理解为开篇章节。第一章是另外的故事了。开篇章就是为了开场,然后让大家熟悉下角色。

思题目什么时候上

新的更新大概7月25号左右上

I liked the game even very much, I expect that the game will move forward and I think the authors may be able to overtake the Eternum

Wow, thank you for this comment! Overtaking Eternum would be a big step for me! I will definitely move forward with this game. I have hired my friend, who is a screenwriter, to write Season 1. She is very good at plot twists. Let's look forward to her performance in writing. In the meantime, please bear with my less-than-perfect(Shitty) writing as we finish the pilot season. LOL. And my 4090 would be delivered this Wed. Let me make some more juicy animations!

我更新了但是启动后发现没有什么变化,怎么说?这次更新的内容是什么呢

目前版本是0.1.4,包含了季雅特别篇,就在主页面。如果铁子你已经玩了可以忽略。0.1.5还需要两周的时间。因为我在等4090显卡这周寄到,给大家渲染更好的画质。

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The current game flowchart.


Hey Iron buddies, I hope you enjoyed playing my game. Please leave any comments about this game. I will answer all of them!
Also, you will never find a developer who treats their fans like brothers and sisters because I'm also a social butterfly in real life~!
Love you all!

NaughtyOba

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So i will give my honest opinion about the game. It's not really a bad review since i kinda liked the game.

> the game is really short for a paid game (i know it's 2 dollards)

> the animation aren't consistant. What i mean by that is some of the animations are really good while some others only have one character moving while the other one is a litteral statue.

> there isn't really anyplot. the MC just have some unholy rizz witch apparently make every women want to have sex with him after 10 seconds of breathing near him. It's just a pornhub level story.


it's a nice game if you want to get off but not really a good vn.


just my feeling about the game. No hard thought.

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Oh BTW, Choices matter. The plot will change based on the choices you make. I will upload a flowchart in the comment section soon!

Thank you for the feedback, Iron Buddy! 

This is my first time working on this with my old graphics card, a 2060, haha. I plan to keep updating the pilot season and add one more DLC for free! 

BTW, it used to be 1.3 dollars but the payment processor charges 30% of each transaction. So it left me no choice but raised to 2 dollars.... 

Right now, the pilot season is aimed at grabbing people's attention, but I will take your advice and focus more on the plot and keep the animation consistent. 

The end of the pilot season will explain the whole plot, so it's not over yet~. 

I'll update the pilot season every 2 or 3 weeks and ensure each update adds 20-30 minutes of playtime. 

So the finale will be in November for the pilot season!

Thank you again for the great comment! Hopefully, you will eventually like it as a visual novel. Hahaha. Thank you again for playing! I will keep up the good work and improve the areas that need it!

Hey Iron Buddies,

Thank you all for the tips! I really appreciate the support. Your encouragement is truly my motivation to develop this game. Let's help me get rid of my old RTX 2060 and upgrade to a 5090 to make an even better game!

American Sweetheart Milana will be partnering with me to be cast in the next episode! See you in 2 or 3 weeks!

Isn't today July 1st? 

DLC's out!~ Iron buddy!

where is the new DLC?  We need more JiYa 

You've got to give the other two female characters a chance to show up, hahaha!

What kind of future tags are you planning dev? Harem? ntr/sharing? Pregnancy? Futa/trans?

What do you recommend? I can create content that caters to most people. I can start a vote somewhere to base the game on what the players want. After all, this game is for you all! I just want to make a great VN possible, although I do need to replace my outdated 2060 graphics card lol.

I also need to consider Steam's content policies since the game will be available there. Steam does not support content involving sexual assault/non-consensual sex, drug/alcohol abuse, self-harm, fetish content such as BDSM, or incest.

 Thanks for the comments!

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Don't do that, you can't please everyone, that's not possible. Don't let the players decide anything other than outfits, hairstyles, and maybe which character a specific update should focus on but not story elements or tags that should be all you. What do you have in mind for a story? What kind of audience do you want?

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Great comment. Great points! I've been working for several different corporations for almost 10 years, and I want to share my experiences(I never developed a game before but I feel like i got this in me). My aim is to captivate an audience ranging from their 20s to their 50s, and even beyond (up to their 100s? LOL! I'm not ageist, but definitely not for people under 18. Kiddos, please shut down the tab if you happen to see this game) with engaging fantasies. Also, it's not like I encourage romantic relationships with your female co-workers—no, LOL.

The main story will focus on a man who achieves success after working hard in a corporation(I want to make 10 seasons matching my 10 yr experience). Along the way, he has some romantic encounters with women. Most of the content will involve regular sexual scenes, but I don't mind including some anal and a bit of light BDSM play.

Well, me personally I like harem games because I don't play through multiple times for different paths and I don't like turning down LIs, but if you feel something like that detracts from your story don't force it. I will say you should probably clarify if you will include any type sharing or netorare because people will definitely ask.

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I would probably go down the harem path, but you can still make choices. I don’t like turning down girls either.

This is my first time making a game. Thanks for the advice!

always happy with pregnancy and solo Lis

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Hahaha I don’t find pregnant women sexually attracted to me but I can do LIs. Hey buddy thanks for commenting. I will make the game better and better because you, my friend, are the real hero(gamelander) lol

Download Mac version and not working

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Could you please try it within the Itch.io app? It works on my MacBook Pro. It should be fine if you play it within the Itch.io app
or drag it to the Application. Sorry for the inconvenience. Please let me know if we can set up a discord call to fix it.

https://itch.io/app 
This is for your time loss. Really sorry about it.

Hey Oba, really like City Nights and just purchased the pilot season. A bit comment on the Jiya DLC. She seems to have done a bit too much plastic surgery. Any chance we keep it more like the pilot season? (nice hair style btw)

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Sorry for the late reply.Plastic surgery is very popular in Korea/Japan/China....Hahahaha.....Wait...I haven't uploaded the DLC yet. I can share some previews with you. Thank you for recognizing my work! I actually like Mai more. LOL



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Oh, I forgot that I uploaded some previews in the description. Sure, I can make her less plastic. Please let me know who you would like to have in the next free DLC. If you have purchased before Canada Day (July 1st), it will be a free update for you. I think you might've mixed up Jiya with Yona (who is not going to show up in the Pilot season). Below is Yona. I'm still modeling her for season 1 and will make her less plastic.


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I think the surgery in general is fine, but it’s just the mouth looks a bit overdone and unnatural. Not sure if you feel the same way haha.

Scratch that. I actually took Yona as Jiya and thought she doesn’t look like Jiya at all lol. But still, not sure if the lip is a bit overdone.

I bought the game a few days ago, so I might get a free update in this case? Not sure how update works for itch, first time user.


The previews look great! Really looking forward to seeing the whole game (btw I got to know the game from xhs haha)


Ps. Saw you replied on xhs that 4k wallpapers are also available on patreon, which unfortunately is not accessible from my region. Any chance I can get them somewhere else?

Haha, yes, you're right. I also feel her lips aren't quite right. She's a beta character, so I can improve her appearance before starting season 1. You'll definitely get a free update. There won't be any extra fees for DLCs. 

I will increase the price to $2 after uploading the Jiya DLC because if I don't, the payment processors charge me 30% per transaction. So, most of your money goes to the payment processor, not to me.

 But for now, I just want you all to enjoy the game and like it. I can post on XHS to ask around which platform is good to use. Be sure to comment there as well~

Dear Players,

This week, I will be addressing the bug and character clipping issues. Additionally, I'll be re-rendering Mai's dancing scene as her face looks unnatural. I hope this hasn't affected your experience of the game too much.

Thank you for your understanding and patience.

Best regards,

Naughty Oba

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Dear Itch players,

Please leave comments if you have any suggestions for improvements. Thank you for your support.

Best regards,

NaughtyOba

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